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Mood

2013-10-24 01:08       Listening to the CD you sent to me   "the solo piano",which is my favorite style of music  there is something painful to soak into my body, little by little. The feeling is one thing named "loneliness", from a worn heart on a distant land. The heart is yours.
     Without doubt, you are really a special friend of mine. We lived and learned love. We raced the sea and challenged the sky.From you I learned what it meant to laugh as well as cry, and I learned how to give as well as how to take.
     Before I met you, I thought the sky was gray. I was a high achiever, but no matter how hard I worked, how many times I attempted, there was still a strong force which constrained me.So I was sensitive to everything around me.  I really tasted the flavor of "loneliness." But you pulled me out. I still remember that night  Snow was descending deep in places that looked shadow and covered up all kinds of filthy things  You came up to me who was weeping and gave me a piece of paper, which It＇s easy in everyday life.
     To be caught up in webs of nonexistent problems,
     Worries with not enough space to prove themselves.
     Depressions with no meaning.
     All these forces working together.
     Gaining more and more power by pushing you
     Further back into yourself.
     Until it＇s self pity.
     Life is against you.
     Everything is wrong.
     Then bitterness.
     The world is at fault, you begin to hate
     Then it＇s over without having ever existed.
     Life is beautiful.
     You are beautiful
     The world is yours
     Cry tears of joy.
     How could something so right ever be wrong?
     But turn and look again.
     You will be running for the rest of your life,
     Trying to escape the reality of mood.
     And the human mind...
     You said to me with a temperate voice:"Hear the song of the bird? In spite of the snow and the wet and the coldness and the loneliness, the bird is singing. It believes that it can fly to
     I beamed, only for your word.  Henceforth, I didn＇t feel lonely, because of you. Now I want to give you the poem you＇ve given me and tell you: You won＇t feel lonely because of me."
     We don＇t fear the punishment of life;we just can＇t suffer the days without communication and love. We＇ve dreamed of the serene life.
     The dawn had just broken above the distant horizon and the pure silver light of morning flooded the field. We were treated to a brilliant display of rounded hill, dotted with sheep. Wild blue berries grew along the path home. Everything was in bloom. We rode on a swan boat or just sat in the sun; we were not afraid of the coming rainstorm, because we soaked our psyche in the sunshine and we were sure that we could recover and rebuild the beauty after the tempest.
     So you must be sturdy. You are capable of coping with any difficulty. Please feel in touch with the world out of your window. You can smell my breath in the fresh air. You can see my childlike smile through the sunshine. You can hear my mild calling from the song of a lovely bird.
     Remember: keep a beautiful mind. I will pray for you everyday, and my heart will go with you wherever you are. （科教作文网http://zw.NSEaC.com编辑发布）
简  评
    世界上什么最珍贵?人与人之间的温情、友情和爱情总能战胜一切黑暗和烦恼——正如作者在心情灰暗、寂寞孤独的时候，一首温情的小诗给她带来了光明，带来了希望，让她体会到只要有感情的存在，一切都是可以战胜的。
    本文以第一、第二人称写作，给人印象深刻。另外作为心情感言，作者在描写心情时婉婉道来，用词典雅，如：“Before I met you，I thought the sky was gray．．．How many times I attempted，there was still a strong force which constrained me．．．I really tasted the flavor of‘loneliness．’”等。
    温馨的文笔，感人的描述使本文值得一读。