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惊人的事: 难以忘怀的经历-An Unforgettable Experien

2014-05-08 01:02 难以忘怀的经历

【内容提示】

人人都知道，地震是一件惊天动地，令人恐惧的事。假如你经历过一场地震而又获救、幸免于难，你会有一种什么感觉呢？你肯定会有很多话要倾诉，你肯定一生也不会忘记这样的经历。如果你经历过这样的事当然有东西可写，即使你没有经历过也可以设想这样的情景来写一篇短文。

【作文示范】

An Unforgettable Experience

When I was a little girl, in the summer vacation in 1976, I went to my mother＇s hometown , Tangshan.

After I got there, at first I stayed at my uncle＇s home . I was very happy in my uncle＇s home because my uncle had a daughter who is older than I. She often took me to visit some places. We spent ten days happily. I remember just on the tenth day there was a big earthquake. It happened about three o＇clock in the morning when I was dreaming. I woke up to find myself under a heap of rocks . I couldn＇t move. I didn＇t, in fact , know anything about what was happening until my uncle saved me from the rubble①.

During the earthquake most of the houses fell down. We set up many tents to live in and received a lot of food from every city in our country. They helped us to tide over② those hard days. I think if we hadn＇t lived in New China we couldn＇t have survived the big earthquake. I am very lucky and so are my uncle＇s family.

（选自1987年4月21日《上海学生英文报》）

【词语解释】

①rubble[＇r)bl] n．碎石；碎砖，破瓦

②tide[taid] over 克服；渡过

【写法指要】

能够在唐山那样的大地震中幸存下来，确实是一件幸运的事，令人终生难忘。作者分三个层次写作此文：1）作者去唐山舅父家度暑假，前十天非常高兴；2）第十天晚地震，舅父从瓦砾中把作者救出；3）舅父一家和作者都幸免于难，祖国各地救援；表达对祖国的热爱。