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动态描写:大陈岛纪游-A Visit to Dachen Islands

2014-02-03 01:34 大陈岛纪游
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写一篇游记，把你们一路走一路看的山水湖海的美景写下来。比如，你们要去某地，需要乘火车或汽车，也许还要坐轮船等交通工具，一路上看到祖国或世界的大好河山，感慨万千，由衷地对那些天造地设、神工鬼斧般的秀丽山川或历史名胜赞叹不已。
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A Visit to Dachen Islands
Last summer, the weather was hotter than usual, so some of my friends and I decided to go to the Dachen Islands and spend a few days there.
On our way, we looked out of the ship＇s windows and saw many little green islands on the sea.
With a loud whistle the ship went into the harbor. Through the windows, I saw many fishing boats sailing here and there. They went out of the harbor with hope and came back with loads of fish. On the market I saw a lot of baskets full of fish.
The next day, we all got up early and went to the beach near the hotel to watch the sun rising. We looked to the east. The clouds were reddish, and then turned bright red. Soon the sun slowly appeared and began to rise. The sky around the sun was very bright and the sun looked like a big ball. The sight was so beautiful that we would never forget.
Not only is the scenery beautiful on the Dachen Islands, but also the people there are very kind.
During our stay we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and ate a lot of sea food. To our disappointment, we had to leave the islands, but we＇ll always remember this trip and the people there.
（选自《英语画刊》高中版1996年第4期）
【写法指要】
本文作者记述了他和同学们乘船去大陈岛游览和小住的情况。除引言段外，全文分两个层次：二、三、四段写景，人随景走，景随人移——海上，渔船点点；市上，鲜鱼筐筐；日出美景永难忘；第五、六段写人——人情好，海味美。文章构成了一幅动态的画面。