景物描写:鼓浪屿——人间仙境-Gulangyu----a Fairyl
2014-02-01 01:33
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鼓浪屿——人间仙境
【内容提示】
鼓浪屿是厦门市的一个小岛，海水把它与市区分开。整个小岛像一座水上花园，人称“人间仙境”。请你按下面的要点写一篇文章，描绘它的美景。
①这里不允许车辆行驶，岛上十分安静。
②这里是“
音乐之家”，到处能听到弹奏钢琴、提琴等的声音。
③“日光岩”是岛上的最高处，在这里可以一览厦门和其他岛屿的美景。
④这里天水相连，天气晴朗时可用望远镜清晰地看见金门岛。
⑤“日光岩”脚下是一座风景如画的花园，44孔桥像一条白色巨龙横跨海面，非常美！
【作文示范】
Gulangyu----a Fairyland in the World
Gulangyu is an island separated from Xiamen city proper①. It＇s like a garden on the water. The shade of the trees covers nearly the whole island. Cars, buses, bikes are not allowed to drive there. Everyone should walk. This makes the place very quiet so that music played by the violin or the piano can be heard here and there. It is the famous“Home of Music”.
The Sunshine Rock is the highest place on the island, so it has become the symbol of Gulangyu. Standing at the top of the Sunshine Rock, one can see the landscape ② of the whole Xiamen ands other small islands. The sky and the sea meet on the horizon. It＇s said that people can see clearly the Jinmen Island through telescope when the sun is shining. There are gentle waves on the sea and lots of people are swimming.
At the foot of the Sunshine Rock is Shuzhang Garden with its picturesque scenery③. The Forty-four Bridge spans ④ over the water like a white dragon. What a beautiful picture!
Such is Gulangyu, a fairyland ⑤ in the world.
（选自1987年2月24日《上海学生英文报》）
【词语解释】
①proper [＇pr&p+] a. （用在名词后面）严格意义上的；本身的，如 Shanghai proper上海市区
（科教范文网 fw.nseac.com编辑发布） ②landscape [＇l$ndskeip] n. 风景（画）
③picturesque scenery [?piktM+＇resk ＇si:n+ri] 风景如画；如画的风景
④span [sp$n] v. 横跨；跨越
⑤fairyland [＇fe+ril$nd] n. 仙境；奇境
【写法指要】
本文采用先总后分的写法对鼓浪屿进行了描写。第一段总的介绍其地理位置与特点。第二、三段采取由上到下或由高向低的顺序进行描述：第二段写由该岛最高处俯瞰全城的情景；第三段写山脚下的花园美景。最后，用一句话总括全文：鼓浪屿是人间仙境，与文章的题目相照应。
