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My Plan for Summer Vacation
The longing summer vacation is approaching, it is the best part of the school year for me. I cannot let the holidays elapse (逝去) meaninglessly, my vacation should be a phase (时期、阶段) of harvest. The events in my plan should give me a sense of infinite potential.
The following plan may reveal the intensity of my desire to travel, work and study in this vacation. In the first few days I want to climb Mount Hua Shan with several friends to refresh ourselves. Then I tend to visit relatives, senior school teachers and former classmates(老同学). Besides, to find out the best ways to cultivate my abilities, I will find a part time job and conduct some social investigation.
In short, I want to do interesting things in the summer vacation. Whatever I do, the goal is the same: to get necessary experience, acquire knowledge and broaden my horizons. Though the six week vacation will pass away at lightning speed, its influence is bound to last long.
核心剖析 本文作者长句、短句交替使用。文中长句显得容量大,表达了较为复杂完整、严密充实的思想内容。句子开头方式有:“In the first few days”等介词短语作状语开句、“Whatever l do"等让步状语从句等句型开句。此外,句子主语除了代词I和it,还使用了多个名词,从而避免了从头到尾一“I”到底。在篇章中通过变化句子长度、句子开头,伞文表达错落有致,语言形式丰富多彩。