亲人之情:我的奶奶-My Granny,亲人之情:我的奶奶

我的奶奶
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你的奶奶最爱你，你也最爱你的奶奶。而且，你奶奶是一位心地善良的人，因而受到人们的爱戴。但是，她病了，病得很重，必须做手术。医生怕她年老体弱顶不住，但她很坚强，坚持做了手术。你每天到医院去服侍她，看着她一天天消瘦很是心疼。请你写一篇文章表达你的一份感情。
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My Granny
The one I love best is my granny. The one who loves me best is also my granny . She is so kind that everyone who knows her likes her very much. But I'm sorry to say that my dear granny got cancer.
It was a cold day, but my heart was even colder. I could not accept the fact that my granny got cancer. Facts are facts. Only an operation could help her. The doctor told us she was too weak to be operated on, but my granny insisted that she could stand it. So the doctors did the operation. After the operation, my granny could not sleep, or eat, or say a word because of the pain .
Every one of my family felt sad. My granny noticed this, so she tried her best to nod and smile to us . We smiled back. Every day, my granny said she felt better but actually the pain was still there. Once, she said to me, “Yangyang, my dear. I'll be all right.”
My granny was growing thinner and thinner, but she was still smiling. The smile gave us hope.
The other day , I went to the hospital to see my granny . She said , “Spring is coming. Though I'm in hospital, I can feel the warmth. Yangyang I think I'll go home soon.”
How I hope she would be home soon!
（选自《英语画刊》高中版1996年第2－3合期）
【写法指要】
本文虽用语简单，但写得娓娓动听，字里行间透露出对亲人的真情实感。这是因为作者用了一些修辞句法的缘故。例如，开头两句用的是回文（chiasmus）辞格；第二段和第四段第一句用的是层递（climax）辞格；第四段第一句后半部分用的是蝉联（anadiplosis）辞格等。

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