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帮人做事帮助大娘找儿子-Helping an Old Woman in Fin

2014-05-04 01:04 帮助大娘找儿子


【内容提示】

根据下列内容，写一篇关于你如何帮助一位大娘找到她的儿子的文章。

放学回家的路上，你看见一位老大娘背着一个沉甸甸的袋子站在路旁，样子十分焦急。你走上前去问她是怎么回事。原来大娘刚从乡下来，进城看望她在钢铁厂工作的儿子。由于初次进城，不知道去钢铁厂的路。于是你就帮她背着袋子，带老大娘去找她的儿子。你们费了很大功夫才找到她儿子的住处，老大娘和儿子十分感激。你回家很晚，又累又饿，但你很高兴，因为你为别人做了件好事。


【作文示范】


Helping an Old Woman in Finding Her son


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One day on my way home from school, I saw an old woman standing by the roadside①, with a heavy bag on her back. She seemed very worried. I went up to ask her what the matter was. The granny② told me that she had just come from the countryside to see her son, who worked in the steel works. As she had never been here before, she did not know the way to the factory. So I took her there. There was really a lot of difficulty in finding her son＇s place. The granny and her son were very thankful to me.

I got home very late, tired and hungry, but I felt happy, for I had done a good deed for the people.


【词语解释】

①roadside [＇r+udsaid] n．路边

②granny [＇gr$ni] n．[口]老婆婆；老奶奶


【写法指要】

本文是一篇写事的记叙文。写记叙文首先要交待清楚时间（when）、地点（where）、人物（who）、事件（what）、原因（why）和如何（how）六要素。这里的时间是“放学后”，地点是“路边”，人物是“我，老大娘和她儿子”，事件是“帮助找人”，原因是“老大娘不认识路”，最重要的是写好“如何（how）”，即事情发展的经过。写好事件经过的方法是按时间顺序安排好行为情节（action），即我们通常所说的“层次”。本文可分为4个行为情节：路遇大娘，上前问讯，领其找子，娘俩致谢。最后，作者用一句话表达自己的思想感情，作为结尾。