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举例说明:我们学校充满爱-Our School----Full of Love

2014-03-12 01:37 我们学校充满爱
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假定你们学校有同学得了重病需要做手术，但手术费用昂贵，该同学家里负担不起。于是，你校学生会便号召师生捐助。在短短的几天内学生会就收到好多钱。在许多好心人的救助下该同学顺利做了手术，他很感激大家。这正是：你们学校充满爱心。【作文示范】
Our School----Full of Love
On April20, after two classes in the morning, the broadcasting station① of our school went on the air. The announcer②told us the sad news that a student named Tong Kai in Junior2 needed a kidney transplant③. It would cost one hundred thousand yuan. It was impossible for his family to pay so much money, but Tong was critically④ ill, so the Student Union called on everyone to do something to help Tong Kai.
The news soon spread over the campus. Everyone was anxious about his illness. From that day on, the teachers and students began to contribute money to help him. We were not rich, but all of us were generous contributors⑤. The teachers donated⑥ part of their salaries. Many students helped Tong with their pocket money. Li Bin, a student in Junior 2, contributed eighty yuan.  He said,“The money we have contributed is not enough for Tong＇s operation, but we have done what we can. We all hope that Tong Kai will get well soon and come back to study with us.”His simple words expressed our deep affection⑦. In only three days the Student Union received ten thousand yuan in all.
With the help of many schoolmates, teachers and other kind people, Tong got enough money and was operated on successfully. He said,“I thought I was the most unlucky person in the world, but now I think just the opposite. I live with the care and love of thousands of kind people. I＇ll face life bravely.”While saying these words, he couldn＇t keep back his tears.
What a warm big family our school is!
（选自《英语画刊》高中版1996年第6期）

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【词语解释】
①broadcasting station广播站
②announcer[+＇nauns+] n．广播员
③kidney transplant[＇kidni tr$ns＇pl%:nt]肾移植
④critically[＇kritik+li] ad．危急地
⑤contributor [k+n＇tribju(:)t+] n．捐助者
⑥donate[d+u＇neit] v．捐赠；捐献
⑦affection[+＇fekM+n] n．爱，友爱
【写法指要】
这是一篇用事实说明“校园充满爱”的文章。第一段是背景介绍；第二、三段用举例法说明主题，大部分是概述，只举了一个典型事例，而且也没有用“for example”等衔接词语。最后用一个简短句子总结全文，抒发感情。