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写摘要:莫扎特的首次演奏-Mozarts First Recital (演奏

2014-03-02 01:16 莫扎特的首次演奏
【内容提示】
阅读下面的文章，然后就其主要内容列一个至少有7个要点的提纲，最后根据提纲写一篇不超过150个词的摘要（summary）。
Mozart＇s First Recital (演奏)
It was a very happy household (同住在一家的人). There was Leopold, a fine musician (音乐家) and music master in Austria. There was his adoring (敬慕的) wife. There was Marianne, a schoolgirl. And there was little Wolfgang, a child not quite four years old.
Marianne was learning to play the piano, and day after day the handsome Leopold stood behind her as she practised. How very patient and loving her father was, and how cleverly he showed Marianne how to play some particularly difficult piece! She was making very good progress, and that was excellent.
And there, almost lost in the big chair, sat Wolfgang, little Wolfgang, who never had to be told to keep quiet, when Marianne was practising.
One evening at sundown (日落) Leopold patted (轻拍) Marianne＇s shoulder saying she had done remarkably (非凡地) well. At that moment Wolfgang climbed on his father＇s Knee and begged to be allowed to play the pretty piece Marianne had now mastered (掌握).
What a joke that was! Picking up his baby son, Leopold laughed, tapped the tiny nose, and said, “Look at your small hands. Why, you cannot span (横跨) the notes (琴键) yet. You must wait, little man. You must wait!”
There was no end of fun during tea, and Marianne had to tell her mother about Wolfgang wanting to play one of the classics (古典作品).When the meal was finished, Marianne helped clear away the dishes while Leopold lit his pipe (点燃烟斗).
But the pipe went out. Leopold was on his feet. “Listen!”said he in awed tones (使人敬畏的声调).“Listen! Marianne is playing that piece better than ever!”
But Marianne was washing pots in the kitchen.
His wife following, Leopold crept (蹑手蹑脚地走) upstairs, the lamp in one hand, his pipe in the other. He pushed open the door, and there was little Wolfgang playing in the darkness. “I love it so!”whispered the child.
It was the beginning of Mozart＇s life of music.
(H. L. GEE C adapted)
【作文示范】
1．提纲
1) the father
2) the daughter and her piano lessons
3) Mozart loved to listen to the piano
4) Mozart＇s request
5) the request was turned down (被拒绝)
6) the father heard the playing of the piano
7) the daughter was not playing
8) the parents＇ discovery
2．摘要 (summary)
Mozart＇s First Recital
Wolfgang Mozart＇s father was a good musician and when his daughter was a schoolgirl, the father tool pains to teach her to play classical pieces on the piano. Wolfgang, not yet four years old, loved to listen to his sister＇s practice. One day, he asked to be allowed to play the piece his sister had been practising. But the request was turned down as a joke, for he was too young to be taken seriously. After tea that evening,the father heard the piece being played upstairs, better mastered than ever. He was commenting on the progress made by his daughter when he suddenly realized that at the moment the girl was washing pots in the kitchen. He and his wife crept upstairs and, to their great amazement, found it was little Wolfgang who was playing the piece in the darkness.(142 words)  
【写法指要】
1）从本文可以看出，提纲可以是词组式，也可以是句子式。
2）从这篇摘要可以知道，写摘要不一定要按原文亦步亦趋地写，可以在融会贯通原文的前提下，重新组织自己的语篇。