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举例说明:我的爱好-My Hobbies

2014-02-16 01:09 我的爱好
【内容提示】
你肯定和别的同学一样有许多爱好，比如体育运动、唱歌、弹琴、读书、绘画等。请你写一篇文章，举例说明你的爱好。要求：内容丰富、翔实。
【作文示范】
My Hobbies
I have many hobbies, such as sports, singing, playing the violin and keeping a diary.
In school, I often hear the P.E. teacher say, sports do good to one＇s health, and will make one live longer. So, I like sports very much. I go running at five o＇clock in the morning, and after classes in the afternoon. I play pingpong with my friends. These sports have kept me healthy.
At home, I like to sing and play the violin. I hope I will be a singer and a violinist① when I grow up. In order to attain these goals②,I go to the teacher＇s home for a lesson every Saturday, and practise singing and playing the violin every day. Busy as I am,  I am quite happy.
Of all my hobbies I like reading books best. In my bedroom there are nearly six hundred books. There are story books, textbooks, magazines, and  others. When I grow up, I will serve the people with the knowledge I have learned from them.
（选自《英语画刊》高中版1996年第5期）
【词语解释】
①violinist [＇vai+linist] n．小提琴手
②attain[+＇tein] these goals达到这些目的
【写法指要】
1）本文的引言段只用一句就把全文的篇题表达出来了。但在篇题里出现的内容正文中未必出现，如“keeping a diary”，而在篇题里没有的正文里也可以写，如最后一段的“reading books”。这是举例说明文的一个特点。
2）正文的三段是按照由次要向重要项目的顺序排列的，每一段均有主题句。第二段的主题句是第二句；第三段的主题句是第一句；第四段的主题句也是第一句。本文没有总结性的结尾段。