惋惜之情:在警察局里-At the Police Station
2014-02-06 01:17
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在警察局里
【内容提示】
暑假期间，为了了解社会你参加了一次公安局对罪犯的审讯活动。被审讯的人是一名19岁的吸毒者。你旁听了公安人员和罪犯的对话后对这个年轻人很是惋惜。请你写一篇文章表达你的惋惜之情。
【作文示范】
At the Police Station
During the summer vacation, I had a chance to visit a police station in order to learn something about society. There I caught sight of a drug addict①.
That day, I was reading a dossier of a case② in the office when a young man was brought in.
“How old are you?”a policeman asked.
“Nineteen,”the man answered in a low voice.
“How long have you been taking drugs?”
“For 3 years.”
On hearing this, I was very surprised. Now I knew how he had become so thin, so pale and so weak. Drugtaking③ cost him so much money that he had to steal. As a result he was caught.
“Now I realize I was wrong. I feel I have let my mother down who has been ill for a long time and is always worried about me. But now…I must die. I must die…．”
Nineteen is a golden age. At this age he could have been at school or in the army or on a farm if he had not taken drugs.
His case proves the truth of a Chinese saying：“A moment＇s error can bring a lifelong regret.④”
（选自《
英语画刊》高中版1997年第4期）
【词语解释】
①drug addict [＇dr)g +＇dikt] 吸毒者
②a dossier [＇d&siei]of a case 一起案件材料
③drug-taking n．吸毒
④A moment＇s error can bring a lifelong regret.一失足成千古恨。
【写法指要】
本文用夹叙夹议的手法写了对一个失足青年的惋惜之情。第一、二段是叙述，写时间、地点和事件；第三段是议论，写作者听到警察与吸毒青年的交谈后的感想；第四段叙述该罪犯忏悔的表白；第五段又是议论，抒发惋惜之情；第六段引用一句中国格言结束全文。
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