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祝贺信:祝贺获得好成绩-Congratulations on Toms Succe

2014-01-14 01:32

祝贺获得好成绩
【内容提示】
假如今天是1990年6月18日。你的名字叫高峰，家住北京西四大街148号。你刚收到你的英国朋友Tom Brown写给你的信，他的住址是：28 Carr Lane, Acomb York, Yo 25HU, U. K.。现在你给他写封回信，信中祝贺他在大学入学（matriculation）考试中获得好成绩，你确信他能考入他所喜欢的重点大学，他一直想当一名外科医生（surgeon），所以你认为他应该学医。最后你告诉他，因为明年你即将高中毕业，从现在起必须充分利用时间做好考试的准备，力争在来年的考试中能像他一样取得好成绩，考入理想的（ideal）大学——北京清华大学。
要求：
①只须用英语表达上述内容，不必逐句翻译。全篇词数：150—180。
②信中不要使用自己的真实姓名和地址。
【作文示范】
Congratulations on Tom's Success
148 Xisi Street
Beijing
P. R. C.
June 18, 1990
Mr. Tom Brown
28 Carr Lane
Acomb York
Yo 25HU
U. K.
Dear Tom Brown,
I have just received your letter. I am really glad to hear that you have done so brilliantly in the Matriculation① Examination. Congratulations! With such excellent results you will be able to get into any leading university you like, I am sure. And I suppose you should study Medicine since it has been your dream to become a surgeon all these years.
Next year I shall finish my middle school and I want very much to enter my ideal university, Qinghua University. So from now on I have to make full use of my time to get well prepared for the next year's Matriculation Examination. I shall try my best to do as well as you have done in your Matriculation Examination this year. Please say hello to your family.
Yours sincerely,
Gao Feng
【词语解释】
matriculation [m+?trkju'leiM+n] n． （大学的）入学考试

【写法指要】
这是一封较为正式的祝贺信。祝贺信（letters of congratulation）是得到亲友、同事、同学通过考试、荣获晋升、获得学位、结婚、喜得贵子等好消息时写的信。这种信要写得及时、真诚、自然、亲切动人。祝贺信一般不宜写得过长。
祝贺信常用的语句有：
①Congratulations on your success /achievements!
②I'm so glad to hear of your winning the prize in the … contest. Congratulations!
③Please accept my heartiest congratulations on your graduation from….
④Heartiest congratulations upon your graduation. May your future be as successful as your middle-school days have been.
⑤A word of congratulation just doesn't seem enough, so I am sending you a gift that I am sure you will find useful.