Our Love are with You

our love are with you

                                             by ---rita

     on 12th of may in 2008, a horrible and severe earthquake hit wenchuan unexpectedlly. on hearing such a sorrow news, i couldn’t believe my ears it was the fact. the clock stooped at that time while my heart was broken. 'we are all wenchuan people", the earthquake is cared by the whole nation, and the pains of people who are suffering is also the pain of all people.

     the sad news spread through everywhere in china, even in the whole world. it was cared by all. the buildings were razed in the worst-hit areas including thousands of people burried under ruins. the roads and communication facilities had been badly destroyed. tears in my eyes flashing,the sence we saw in the disaster couldn’t be described with words.

in the earthquake, the original buildings, had been moved to the ground. many lives were dead . but it truly reflected the world of love. the people from everywhere and soldiers went to help wenchuan.  the ordinary necessities were sent to them. the homeless were sent to live in the simple structures houses. the wounded and children were save lives .the rescue screen all those were touched by the people.

i believe that evevrything will be better. the disaster had blocked the door of many lives, but it couldn’t block the door of love. it couldn’t prevent us from rebuilding the newly wenchuan. as long as we unite as one, believe that the disaster will always be the last, our love are always with you !

                           by --- rita

                          漳州乔登美语 六年级学生:周邦枚

这篇英语文章语言流畅，感情丰富而层次清晰，英语知识运用较好。句子架构好。用场景表达了 “爱和汶川同在。灾难阻挡不了人世间爱的传递”。行文流畅。是一篇小学生成功的英语习作！